dilluns, 17 de desembre del 2012

Tina around the world


“Tina around the world” is a story that I have invented to explain to the pupils of the class where I’m doing my Practicum II and I will explained to the after Christmas.

As I have done a lot of effort writing the story, I would like to share it with all of you:


Once upon a time there was a girl who had a dream, her name was Tina. She was beautiful, clever and a hard worker working girl but she hadn't got enought money to pay for a travel. Every little coin she could earn she saved it as a treassure.

One night Tina went to sleep as a normal day, but that night it would be the most exciting adventure she had ever done her ion her life.

She  would sail around the world in just one night!!!!!

She put her pijamas and went to bed, she covered herself with the soft blanket when suddenly she heard a noise from the same room.

An strange and unknowned  voice said:

- Hey, Hey, Heeeeeeeeeey!!! I'm here!

Tina turned around and saw that the carpet had drawn a face.

The carpet said:

- Don't you see me, or maybe you're blind?

Tina got was shocked when she realized that who was talking it was the carpet who was talking.

Then the carpet said:

- Do you want to come whith me, are you brave enough?

Tina wasn't sure about what to answer buuuuut suddenly a loud YES came from inside her.

Tina grabbed a bag and sat down on the carpet and the carpet said:

- Whish Which country would you prefer to visit first?

- Egypt!!!!

The carpet and Tina arrived to Egypt, she could visited the magnificent pyramids and the NIl river. In Egypt Tina met an old womaen who gave her a pressent. I, it was a beatiful blue Egyptian amulet with the shape of a scarab.

Then the carpet asked again to Tina for what oanother country she would like to visite and she said:

- A ... Australia!

Suddenly she was in the middle of the Australian outback, there were lots of Kangaroos, emus, wallabies, possums, koalas and other diferent animals. She was amazed and she felt the happiest girl in the world.

In Australia Tina met an aboriginal boy, he gave her the fruit of a Baobab Tree. Indigenous Australians painted and carved the outside of the fruit and the boy wore it as ornament, he said that it would bring good luck to her.

Tina allways had wanted to attend the opera, and the carpet brings brought her to the Sydney Opera, one of the most famous one in the world. She really enjoyed, however she was getting tired, she said to the carpet to go back to Spain. The carpet was feeling a little bit dizzy after the opera and instead of going back, they went to Chinea. 

Tina wasn't angry with the carpet and decided to visit some important places. She walked along the Great Wall of China and then she went to a restaurant, she ate rice with the chopsticks. Firstly she didn't know at all how to used them but then she perfected the technique. She kept the chopsticks as a souvenir.

Tina, tired and not enough sure that the carpet could bring her back to Spain, decideds to catch a plane.

When she goet in the plane a voice said: Xing Chan Chu Bazil.

She was going to Brazil!!!!!

The carpet said to Tina:

- As we are far away fromof Spain why don’t we don't seize the day?

So she went to see the Amazon River and the Carnival. Someone gave her a fancy dress and she started to dance and dance when suddenly she was awakened by her mother.

- Sweety get up, is time to have breakfast. Said her mother with a soft voice.

- Wake sleepyhead! Insisted her mother.

Tina got up, she had a backpack full of things like a beatiful blue Egyptian amulet with the shape of a scarab, a fruit of a Baobab Tree, chopsticks and a fancy dress, also she had some rice in her pijamaes.

The girl approached to the carpet, she seemed quite doubtful and then the carpet smiled at her. 

After that, Tina and the carpet goet a really good relationship, they spent time together discovering the most beautiful places in the world  and they lived happily ever after.

1 comentari:

  1. What a lovely story Anna! I´m sure you could do lots of wonderful things with this story in the preschool language class. :-)

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